Showing vs Telling Workshop

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Thursday, March 5th at 7:00 PM ET

Showing Versus Telling Workshop

Info dumps. Emotional over-explaining. Scenes that stall instead of moving.

Most pacing problems aren’t structural — they’re “telling” problems.

In this special 2-hr session, you’ll learn how to identify emotional labels, filter words, summaries, and author intrusion — and replace them with immersive, character-driven storytelling. Through real examples, rewrites, and layered techniques, you’ll practice transforming explanation into action, behavior, subtext, and lived-in dialogue.

We’ll cover deep point of view, environmental echo, restraint, and how to drip-feed worldbuilding without stopping the story cold. You’ll also learn when telling is necessary — and how to use it strategically to control rhythm and clarity.

If it feels like your story pauses to explain… this class will teach you how to keep it moving.

This workshop includes

1 x 2 hour interactive session by a bestselling author.

Learn why "Show don't tell" is some of the best (and worst) writing advice you'll ever hear.

Recording available to review at any time.

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